Fall in Love Again

Fall in Love Again

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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Falling in LOVE with the same person you fall for in the past is not wrong

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Girl I’m so sorry that I screwed up with your Heart
I disappointed you, I tore it apart
I did not mean to hurt you, I didn’t want to feel the pain
So please let our love bloom again

Please don’t be scared, I’m not a monster
Please don’t hide
I’ll make things right, I swear to be better
And I promise to be always by your side

Please don’t fill your heart with hate
we can start over, it’s not too late
this time my love is true
like the pureness of the ocean blue

Let us fall in love again

Let me help you to ease the pain
It hurts me seeing you cry
With my love, I want to make you smile

 

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
kinda weird. I just met my Ex and bwalah!

"Past is past. And the person that I love is the present you."

gyaaaabuuuuu!!!!

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hmmm interesting write. I like the theme.. but huh.. for me.. it's a bit weird. lol.
It is sweet and nice though.
I don't think I could fall in love with an ex again.. lol. The thought of it.. seems strange. lol.. is it odd for me to say that?

Well written poem though! Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is sweet, I hope you get the fresh start you're looking for

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well, for me, about the description, it's a bit wrong to fall in love with your ex again. You guys have separated already for a long time and that is your decision, so why go back again? That is kinda weird. I agree with Sleeping Maiden but never mind that much, this is a good poem.

...Layla...

Posted 9 Years Ago


hmmm interesting write. I like the theme.. but huh.. for me.. it's a bit weird. lol.
It is sweet and nice though.
I don't think I could fall in love with an ex again.. lol. The thought of it.. seems strange. lol.. is it odd for me to say that?

Well written poem though! Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem...
Emp, yan b ung s "K"...? XD

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Liz
I just went through a tough break up, so I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The flow here is second to none...exceptional!!!
And hehe the good old ex....
sometimes we do feel the need to go back and be better...
like you have have pointed out.

A tremendous and sweet romantic poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is sweet and it reads like a song. Nice work xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was so sweet ,nice and romantic
i trule like every line in this :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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