Not a Marionette

Not a Marionette

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

you shouldn't have played my heart within your hands

"

Trying to be someone I don’t know

Just to make you happy and proud of your girl
This relationship is nothing but a show
being untrue to myself is a real burden

                              

I gave you all my love

And still I am not enough  
I’m not a girl to display
and my feeling are not for you to play

Now I have become undone
Am I your girlfriend just for fun?
Everything is just a game for you
I was a fool for always believing in you

Thought you’ll always be there
but you’re not there, never were
Everything, I gave it all
but you just let me fall

The tables had turned
our pictures had burned
what we had, our relationship, is a lie
and the only thing that’s left is a broken smile

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I'm not a toy..... RAWR!!!

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That hurts a lot. I mean when someone uses you to take advantage of something only. You have expressed yourself and feelings here nicely. Good one, Desmund.

...Layla...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Your emotions were clearly reflected to this poem. Very nice! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I never did like people who break hearts. It leaves people sad and emotionally dead.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I felt the heartbreak... The emotions you have conveyed were vividly eminated from your heart within this piece. There was a very nice rhythmic flow to this as well. Nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love this it is fantastic...
and oh yes some people use people like they are toys...
relatiionships shoud be unconditional love...

Great write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


interesting and true your worth so much (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great Job!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a great read. It's well written and I like the font you used. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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