My Lost Love

My Lost Love

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

our memories is like a sharp knife, it's slowly slicing my life.

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I tried to move on so many years
but our memories are like chains
it binds me to the past with pain
And all I can do is to shed a thousand tears

Fragile heart is bleeding
with the shock stuck in my brain

I wonder when these wounds will heal again
when my hope is slowly dying

Sulking and staying here
will never bring you back, my dear
you can never comeback to hold me

Nor your love to caress me

 

You’re my brightest Star
Fallen from the dark sky

You’ve gone to a place so far
it’s so hard to say goodbye





© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
To my dearest one that I will never see again. ^^, I hope you like it.

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Im sure whoever it is they will love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh My Goodness, I am so filled with many tears.. I'm so sorry for your loss

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was really great piece
i loved that so much :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it...
So sad..

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 9 Years Ago


A super sad poem. There's that heartbreak that one can feel while reading this. Well-inked.

Posted 9 Years Ago


That's gorgeous.
I can practically feel the emotion rolling off in waves. :]
Nice work. :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


WAH! This poem makes me feel so sad. I love it though! Such emotions taking power here. =) I can relate so well. Great job! I love the flow and rhyme.
Awesome!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love this write...
emotions are perfectly composed and executed :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow...ok i relate to this so well...made me tear up...good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


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ohw... emotions are outpouring. i love how this flows beautifully. :) great job on this!! ^_^
loved these lines:

I tried to move on so many years
but our memories are like chains
it binds me to the past with pain
And all I can do is to shed a thousand tears


Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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