My Lost Love

My Lost Love

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

our memories is like a sharp knife, it's slowly slicing my life.


I tried to move on so many years
but our memories are like chains
it binds me to the past with pain
And all I can do is to shed a thousand tears

Fragile heart is bleeding
with the shock stuck in my brain

I wonder when these wounds will heal again
when my hope is slowly dying

Sulking and staying here
will never bring you back, my dear
you can never comeback to hold me

Nor your love to caress me


You’re my brightest Star
Fallen from the dark sky

You’ve gone to a place so far
it’s so hard to say goodbye

© 2011 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
To my dearest one that I will never see again. ^^, I hope you like it.

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Such a lovely read you have composed.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is great!! Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago

So sweet...Heehee...I like it...So much emotions...

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love it. I thought this was an awesome part:

You’re my brightest Star
Fallen from the dark sky

: Excellent

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 25, 2011
Last Updated on December 25, 2011


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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