A Poem by Desmund Tiny

We're more than friends but less than lovers.


I didn’t dare to cross the line

Because you’re a great friend of mine

I never wanted to messed up this friendship

Even though my heart desires a closer relationship


It will be a bliss, a heaven

If we can be more than friends

But our situation makes me fell so blue

All that I want is to stay right beside you


Pretending like I don’t care

But actually, it is hard for me to bear

I want to turn away

But these feelings won’t go away


I tried to let go

But my heart doesn’t want to

So I kept in my wallet your photograph

Even though for me it is not enough


I guess this Valentines I’ll be alone

Because I am stuck here in the Friendzone

© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
T~T there's nothing I can do...... hayzzzz....

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The Friendzone . . . more heartless, weird and cruel than the Twilight Zone

Posted 8 Years Ago

no, not the friendzone!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I hate the friendzone.... horrible place to be stuck..... other the horribleness of the topic this is a really nice poem! nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Beautiful write of a real Poem... Nice to read.. thanks for sharing..

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ah yes, the Friendzone --been there way too many times --still ended up with a lot of friends, which is a good thing. Yet your poem does sum this up in a way many fear to mention, the hardest part is in pretending. You express that very nicely in this write. Thanks for the wisdom here.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Aww. So sweet and sad. I feel your longing

Posted 9 Years Ago

I really love the font going into large to make your point:)
Actually a pretty damn good poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I cannot really relate myself to this one but I may know how it feels. Being just only a friend hurts so much. You just cannot love that person for the sake of your friendship. A nice poem. I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Hey looky there, a poem that describes my entire existance. bitterness aside, this is a very good piece and is well written. Very good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Hmm...Friendzone...It's so familiar...But unlike unrequited love, this sounds better because you're close to the person...Anyway, looks like many people are having a terrible Valentines Day...Well, I still believe that "Single? Oh, come on, God's busy writing my love story"!
A really nice poem...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on February 6, 2012
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Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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