Into the Abyss

Into the Abyss

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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why is my sin is my very existence? Why?

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Is it a sin to be true?

Is it wrong to express everything I feel?

Don’t I have my own will

Nor have the right to know the truth?

 

I face this world of hallow

My sin is my very existence

And my punishment to live in grim presence

And my soul is a prisoner of sorrow

 

I’ve been taken by the black wings

And thrown into the pit of misery

All I can hear is the symphony of their screaming

And it drives me into my worst insanity

 

I have lost all that I have, everything

There’s nothing left in me

Darkness has swallowed my heart, I feel so empty

Here in abyss I die endlessly

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
a result of my random mood.....

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I like the diary entry look to this poem and it's so fitting for the mood. Is it a sin to be true?... such a good question... it seems the best answer is "yes" when so many others need you to be false. I hate when that happens, but I love this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sad but still a wonderful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very sorrowful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awwww, so sad really. I can relate... but yeah, bad things that happen can make us feel like this. I've been broken down so many times.. but you know, I realized.. the bad things that tortures us is what makes us stronger. Though it's so difficult to see because the bad stuff makes us emotional, we're blind to see what we can do about it. Hope you'll be okay. Cheer up? =)
I like this write though. I love the darkness.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Don't take all the bad happenings seriously and I'm sure you'll feel great...Besides we're about to graduate, just enjoy and understand the circumstances...Nice poem.
:)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is very emotional,
Very well potrayed.
A very good write.
~Amai

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrificly written...
emotions potrayed real well....can feel that despair type mood
super!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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