You can't be mine

You can't be mine

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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I asked him but he just stared at me.....

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You’re always there by my side

With a sweet feeling that makes me happy

And it cheers up mu spirit inside

Your smiles cast a spell on me

 

All night, I was thinking of you

While staring at the starry dark sky

I know that I’ll never be the one for you

So I always end up with a deep sigh

 

It was painful that we’re just friends

Painful to no to be able to make you mine

How can you smile and stay fine

While I’m here crying out loud to heaven

 

You keep forcing me onto other boys

You keep predicting my love, my choice

He’s my destined one you say

But you’re the one I always pray

 

You’re pushing me into other’s arms

In my love life, you want to be supportive

In my point of view, you’re just being insensitive

Because your help was a harm

 

Yes, I do like him

But I never said that I’m in love with him

You’re the one that I love, the man I want

Why?! Why can’t you be the one?

 

 

 

Why can’t you be the one for me?

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
It may not be that good because I just wrote this to ease the pain of being rejected...... (~T,T~)

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oh this is so sad and heart tugging,
I really loved the flow & rhyme scheme.
You are very talented.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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aww...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awe This is sad :/

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice poem, well written, with lots of good ideas.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sosad and I kinda understand about wanting someone,but not being able to have them...I hope he realizes what he's got. great write! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


that one really hit home with me

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awww! I'm so sorry to hear that. Being rejected can be so hard and so hurtful. But you know, you'll find someone else... a better guy most likely..
Cheer up my dear girl!
I love your poem. It's so emotional and the ache is shown well. I love the way you expressed yourself! I hope you find love again.. =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very well expressed...
Suntukin mo n lng bgla pg gnun, haha! Joke lng... XD
Nice poem
:)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cheer up, dear. It's really hard to be in love with someone who is insensitive to feel your heart's throb. Very well expressed. xx ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can relate to this poem........really hard to be rejected.
Me too, i always ask myself "why can't you love me?", "why it should be someone else?"...... i know the feeling of being declined by the person you love. :/

anyway...i liked this poem..
and while i'm reading this.. i'm sorry but I can't help thinking BOTH of you...xD
i am very sure of the one you're referring at...haha xD
great job! keep writing! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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