Who Wins it All

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

We are little warriors fighting for their fun

In this situation, you can trust no one

Tell me ladies and gentlemen

Why do we have to be condemned?

Higher ups are cruel puppeteers

Twisting our strings with pain and fear

This is a nightmare not a dream

I don’t want it! Can’t you hear our screams?!

Sickly being played in this wonderland

Our hearts are being tortured by their Master plan

They put poison through me veins

And the grim slowly eats my soul and brain

Conscience has slowly faded

As our heart devoured by hatred

The right and wrong tend to be blurred

With their reason that are absurd

Can’t deny these darkness building up inside

Take it and carry the vengeance until I die

Kill, kill without a second thought

Be their toy, a killing robot

I don’t know if I am going to last

Because everything happens so fast

Only pain I can trust to get me through the day

In this hell, we’ll never get away

Ladies and Gentlemen, I’ll ask this to you again

Who wins it all in this game that is insane?

Who wins it all?!

© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

In time of despair... we have our reasons.... (~^3^~)

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Lily Mae

Sometimes it's hard to know who wins it all.. Great write with asking the perfect questions..

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sometimes it's hard to know who wins it all.. Great write with asking the perfect questions..

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Your Perfect Disaster

It's a very wonderful write and full of very true emotions. Thanks for sharing, I loved the story line.

Posted 12 Years Ago

It's a very wonderful write and full of very true emotions. Thanks for sharing, I loved the story line.

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very nice sickly poem, i liked this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

very nice sickly poem, i liked this :)

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Aravind

A dark subject matter... Really has a great rhythm to it, good flow (through your clever rhymes). The images are just PHENOMENAL! Unbelievable...

Nice echo from the title to the end... A little suggestion try to have your main line "Who wins it all?" somewhere at the middle as well. This makes sure that the echo is consistent and stays well on the reader's mind.

Amazing read altogether.

Posted 12 Years Ago

A dark subject matter... Really has a great rhythm to it, good flow (through your clever rhymes). The images are just PHENOMENAL! Unbelievable... Nice echo from the title to the end... A little suggestion try to have your main line "Who wins it all?" somewhere at the middle as well. This makes sure that the echo is consistent and stays well on the reader's mind. Amazing read altogether.

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SoulCrusader (Yas)

What a profound read I found this to be...excellent :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

What a profound read I found this to be...excellent :D

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C4rm3lC0rn

Il be able to relate too this soon. I'll be shipping out for the navy soon and military is nothing more than a weapon of the government.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Il be able to relate too this soon. I'll be shipping out for the navy soon and military is nothing more than a weapon of the government.

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Tomislav Petricevic

I can totally relate to this one. Small people like ourselves serve as mere pawns in the game of highly-positioned people...sometimes we can't tell what's good or what's bad, so everything becomes gray...and then, when we seek justice, we may succumb to what used to be dark area...
Anyways, I love this poem! It's strong meaning and very good expressions make it really awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I can totally relate to this one. Small people like ourselves serve as mere pawns in the game of highly-positioned people...sometimes we can't tell what's good or what's bad, so everything becomes gray...and then, when we seek justice, we may succumb to what used to be dark area... Anyways, I love this poem! It's strong meaning and very good expressions make it really awesome.

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Thea

A very interesting poem...Haha! Kaloka...Galit n galit ung tono... XD
Well done, wlang mnanlo... :p
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago

A very interesting poem...Haha! Kaloka...Galit n galit ung tono... XD Well done, wlang mnanlo... :p :)))

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Added on April 9, 2012
Last Updated on April 9, 2012
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Desmund Tiny

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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..