She's Best and I am a Pest

She's Best and I am a Pest

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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we're totally opposite and so how they treat us too are totally opposite

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She’s so cute and energetic

         Unlike me who’s ugly and pathetic

 

She dresses so stylish and pretty

         Unlike me who always look so crazy

 

She’s a socialite, easy to get along

         Unlike me who always prefer to be alone

 

She soars like a beautiful butterfly

         Unlike me who’s nothing but a pain in the eye

 

                                                       For them......

 

                    She’s always the best

                 Unlike me who’s always a pest

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


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A good write. Thanks for sharing. Cheers

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very goooood. A bit depressing, but very well done. It made me think of the song by Radio head. Creep

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XFkzRNyygfk

Posted 8 Years Ago


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aww its amazing :) nice write

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a clever piece of work that says a lot about how most of us subjectively underestimate our own value,a funny, wry poem that explores a real serious subject,the problems of perception and the danger of estimating others without knowing them better . A good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


ahhh! good writting.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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tk
aww.. err. anyare sa review ko?? -_-
oi wag ka nmn ganyan. you should not let others bring you down. but i understand what you're feeling because i feel that way sometimes. but i realize, i must not let self-pity rule over me. self-esteem and confidence is important.
anyway, to my review: you've done an amazing job with this. straight to the point, sincere and heartfelt. very relatable. the rhyming scheme was also great. very beautifully written. :) thanks for sharing!
P.S: You're Beautiful. ♥
♥♥♥

Posted 8 Years Ago


There's an extreme bitterness and emotion(anger?) in this poem...
But I quite agree, sometimes, people tend to compare us to someone who is JUST beautiful and classy...Anyway, don't worry! You have much talent unlike her, whoever she is... :p
Great work...
:)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this. The style of the words really puts more of an effect on it, and it's sad if you feel this way though I can relate. -hugs- good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Roe
such strong emotions in this. comparing your self to another. great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the rhyming here, and the font style. This poem is something I can relate to, because often I have looked down on myself, felt that I wasn't enough, compared myself with other girls and felt so ugly and unpopular. However, it's important to have self esteem. There's always the bright side of being who you are, it's important to love yourself. So what, you don't wear stylish clothes and hang out with the coolest people? There must be someone who loves your simplicity. Besides, people who are alone most of the time are more thoughtful. Be proud of yourself! I bet she can't write poetry like you haha. Nevertheless, good job, keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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