A Poem by Desmund Tiny

yeah I hate you but I love you.......




I always say “I love you”

I wonder if you ever love me too?

Because all you did is laughing

I don’t know if you’re just pretending





I cried and screamed so loud

Are you deaf not to hear a sound?

You said we’re just fine

for me it wasn’t, you always don’t have a time





There are times you lose your faith

and makes me so desperate

it doesn’t matter how good or terrible you are

I still love you even if we’re at war





I love you like I always do

I don’t know if you really love me too

I am getting frustrated

Coz babe it’s so complicated



(OO) TT *turns the table* 



© 2012 Desmund Tiny

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Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
waaaaaaaaaaaaah.....(ノ◉‿◉)ノ ┳┳ *turns the table*

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I liked this a lot. Simple and cute ^^
The structure is pretty neat.

Posted 8 Years Ago

The little people as headers are absolutely brilliant. Wish I'd thought of it. All the same, it was an interesting poem with a clear message. c:

Posted 8 Years Ago

Your poem is so creative (as usual) and of course the love/hate thing is complicated by its very nature. Nice work, but I didn't get the purpose for all the emoticons, and didn't get the ending at all -- yes I'm falling behind the Looks like a solid 96. Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 8 Years Ago

A good poem, but I think the ending should be more powerful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

hahaha.. definitely i can relate in this poem because i'm the one on the picture.. hahahahaha xD.
i just remembered the days that we're together.
~nostalgia~ hayy.... T_T

anyway, this is really great. can feel the sincerity in the words.
the words seem to be just voiced out from your heart..
nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I enjoyed the poem. Nice flow of thoughts and I like the set-up of the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nice one Des, you're different emotions in each of the stanza made things different and flowing simultaneously all at the same time. And yes, even if you're at war loving that "one" you're talking about would be just easy. Why? Because it's already in your heart. A job well done once again. Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Oyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...mag re review ako kahitnapaka lungkot ko ngayon..ang ganda nito..sino kaya tintukoy mo..hmmmm..

Posted 9 Years Ago

:) i just remember the song "Complicated" by Avril . . and also contents of your poems really amazing!!.. i like it... :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

Posted 9 Years Ago

So true, we can't help loving some people,
brilliantly told xD

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 25, 2012
Last Updated on May 26, 2012


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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