When you left me

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The time seem so slow today

As I watch people pass my way

I cruelly pushed you away

With each harsh words that I said

 

Here missing your kisses and care

Longing for my love to be here

I want to say sorry so sincere

To apologize to all the pain I caused

 

Now, here I am all alone

Having this day on my own

Regretting that you’re already gone

I’m wishing that you’re still with me

Author's Note

just being dramatic

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Ah... this really says "Learn, though never look back" because if you do you will get stuck (in time as it passes so slowly). Very interesting write Des, nice wisdom, and very carefully written, I can see. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Sad and well written. I can relate.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Relatable emotions here...
can feel them...
superb

[Kuhr Gred]

gosh.. i feel you're crying! i feel it.. anyway i like it.. GREAT WRITE

[Jed Sabffle]

great poem. this is enlivened by the overflowing sentiments.
i can absolutely feel the longing for someone who has already gone.

[Coyote Poetry]

Not dramatic. Just words expressing the sadness of separation. Easy to take blame and swim in sadness. I like the flow of thoughts and the wish at the end of the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote