A Chapter by Destiny Newjade

A mystery... Who is to blame?

Sophia Lustre, Age 12. Location: Null, CA
It wasn't my fault.
All I knew was that Rachel and the others were playing a little joke. That all our neighbors -- all the residents of Von Schatten Road -- would get a laugh out of it. I didn't get it at first, but of course, as everyone says, naive, gullible little Sophie would never understand something like that.
But this was different. This was the last thing I had expected.

© 2012 Destiny Newjade

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Ooh! I'm super curious now...

Posted 8 Years Ago

Hmm, interesting. A nice cliffhanger ending which is exactly what's making me read more. *moves on to next chapter*

Posted 8 Years Ago

Don't get me wrong when I say this, but this isn't really my preferred genre of books, but this is a really nice idea and I can tell good things will come from this. Don't quit on this, just continue on with this, don't let anyone discourage you.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Short, mysterious, and very suspensful leaving with a cliffhanger. . . amazing! It definetly leaves me wanting more and wondering what's going to happen next!

Posted 8 Years Ago

A short introduction. But you did get my attention. Open the door to mystery and question. I will keep reading. A very good introduction.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This was short but it has me wondering what is about to happen next. So on to the next chapter I go

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 14, 2012
Last Updated on April 14, 2012
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