Never Know

It might sound like another one of my other poems, I just had to get these thoughts out. Every letter I typed hurt

Never Know

 

So you don’t want me

That’s alright

I’ll find someone who does

 

So you think to use me

That’s alright

I’ll find someone who doesn’t

 

So you don’t love me

That’s alright

I’ll find someone who will

 

So you want to abuse me

That’s alright

I’ll find someone who won’t

 

You’re just another fool

Who doesn’t want me

Want to wait awhile for another

Maybe something better

There is no better

 

You’re just another fool

Keeping your singlehood

Thinking I’ll take away your freedom

You can have best of both worlds

I don’t have the need to tie you

Nor do I want to be tied

 

You’re just another fool

Don’t know what’s right in front of you

Don’t know what you have

Wait till I’m gone

Then you’ll see

Then you’ll know

All that you had

All that was yours

But now it’s gone

Now it’s his

Now you’ll never know

Reviews

[Heather]

i loved this piece

[Celestial Witch Child]

Nicely done.

[Crazy Cat Man]

what a very powerful piece. and nice big send off to an ex who is not worthy of your love. thats how I look at relationships. this person is obviously taken advantage of your kindness and u are better off without him. No need parasites in our lives. very cathartic to read.

yes the b*****d will never know and its better that way. My ex will never know what im doing. I blocked her on facebook and even names that are similar to hers :P nope she will never know

[Emrick]

haha.sounds funny to me.And how was he supposed to know if you wont tell him....
Your poems a nice teacher.

[John Stussy]

Wow, you really know how to add a bite to your writing! I almost feel bad for the bloke mentioned... almost. Fools miss out though, their own fault. Stay strong, find better than falsehoods, and keep on writing!

[Keisha Danielle]

Like the last stanza. Too many people dont know what they have.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must release the dead weight. I like the thoughts and the desire to break free. Good thoughts leading to a very strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[R.A. Youngblood]

Sad, empty, frustrating, emotional...
Even if it's dark it makes me feel inspired.
I specially like the ending and repeating the same words in each stanza to make it nice flowing. Powerful.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[GunMetal]

You don't deserve someone who won't see you for what you can be for them. Pity on them. This is very relatable. Keep it up.

[Arik]

Bah! Another sad poem, I'm going to have to watch a Disney movie or something just to cheer me up after the stream of poems I've read. Anyways the piece itself is very good and has a good how do I put it strong independent vibe from the narrator.