Denials Need

Written at 2:30am, quite hastily, I couldn't get the thoughts fast enough. The poem might be a bit mixed up, but it suits my thoughts at the moment haha. Enjoy!

Denials Need

 

There’s just something about you

Take over my mind

Take over my heart

I can’t quite put my finger on it

 

I’m in denial

I don’t feel

I don’t want

But damn I’m starting to need

 

A little taste here

A little taste there

A little touch here

A little touch there

A smile

A laugh

A wink

And a kiss

Now I’m hooked

 

I don’t want you

I don’t feel you

I need you

You’re taking me over

Making me insane

 

It’s all about you

Your voice

Your smile

Your eyes

And your scent

 

It’s not enough

It’s never enough

Jumbled thoughts

Mixed feelings

I want

I don’t want

I need

I don’t want to need

I’m yours

You’re hers

I’m his

You’re mine

 

You feel me

You want me

You need me

Come get me

I dare you 

Reviews

[C.]

I really really loved this :) Keep up the good work

[Ian H Morrison]

love it love tha maniacness of it the sheer speed is just so exhilirateing

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love when you jumble your thoughts togther since it makes such a nice and flirty poem! I think you done an excellent job on this even if you wrote this when you were half awake. Haha. Well-written, good job! :D

"Come get me
I dare you" That shows your flirty side! :)
Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing! :D

[Eloha]

I like the flirty tone of this piece. It leads the reader into identification.

It makes me nearly want a man or a woman who challenges me in bed, sometimes a coy and submissive aggression and witty lust, is the best turn on, around.

[w]

Not sure how I feel about the repetition, but I like the piece overall.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Interesting write.

[Dominique]

This is a great poem. I actually know how you feel, its sad too cuz I letted him slip, even showed him the door. The poem is a little choppy but i think in this senario it works. Although there could be a few things that you could fix to make it run smoother. Nice write.

[The Flame of the Knight]

This is good. Exactly how i felt about a girl. Still do kinda.

[Kes]

I love this. I love how choppy it is. The last line is really nice too. I think the style of this accurately conveys the feeling - we've all been there. :)
Great write - keep up the hard work.
K

[Keisha Danielle]

We've all been there before! :)