Flakey Boys

Flakey Boys

A Poem by Destinyxi
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Inspired by The Reviewers poem 'Flakey Girls'. This is the boys version of it. Enjoy!

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Flakey Boys

 

You know they look good

These flakey boys

They put on that smile

And you buy it

 

They reel you in

They’re in it for the catch

You’re the fish

And they’re the fishermen

 

They just want to get wet

It’s a typical one night stand

They’re booking their schedules

She’s today, she’s tomorrow

 

And they flirt

They flirt so sweet

They kiss so good

And they look so nice, wanting and hard

 

You know it won’t last

But for the moments

That he takes you

You think it’s worth it

 

Where’s your pride, darling?

He’s just leading you on

He’ll ride you till you’re out of gas

Till your engine stops running

Then he’s going to jump start another car

And continuously repeat

Till he gets to his destination

 

Don’t be another car

Just another ride

A brick to step on

Something flat to travel along

 

Find your pride

And find someone who rides you

Just as much as you ride them

So if your engine breaks

So will his

And you’ll be stuck, side by side

Unable to drive to a new destination

 

Ah, these flakey boys

They’re in it for the catch

They’re in it for the ride

Ride ‘em back

Ignite your pride

Shake them till they’re all out

Of flakes 

© 2012 Destinyxi


Author's Note

Destinyxi
If you liked this poem, check out the poem that inspired this one!

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/The-Reviewer/1019995/

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WOW damn this is awesome. im super impressed. I like your version of "Flakey People" awesome rhyme scheme, great flow, u took us to an adventure of the mind of one of these flakey boys. im glad my poem triggered yours. :) it sucks to deal with flakey people.....but we must not give up....somewhere out there...we wont find a flakey one...we will find a real one :) who wont play with our emotions. great piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

10 Years Ago

i love the car metaphors. Pefect.
Destinyxi

10 Years Ago

Haha, it's all thanks to you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Crazy Cat Man

10 Years Ago

I'm glad I inspired u. I also posted a link to ur poem on my poem. :) its a 2 part piece :D
Wow, you're reeling them off fast and furious now...Florida has indeed been theraputic for you haha...I just hope you're staying clear of flakes down there ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Destinyxi

10 Years Ago

Yeah, Florida is doing me good. I am definitely staying clear of men :P
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

lol :P
hahahah i loved this one .... when i saw the flakey girl poem i was wishing that some one should write a poem about flakey boys ...thank you for sharing this

Posted 10 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

10 Years Ago

haha i told her to write her own version. :) im glad she did it. Of course I cannot write a "Flakey .. read more
afra

10 Years Ago

yeah it would be weird if you would write that ..lol
Destinyxi

10 Years Ago

haha yeah that'd be a bit weird. I'm glad you liked it afra! :)
love it really funny but well written aswell

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hahaha this is wonderful. The ending was simply marvelous. It was humorous, but with a serious message if you cared to dig about searching for it. Nice job. :)


Posted 10 Years Ago



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