Everyone's Enemy

Haiku? Maybe? I don't know.. isn't it too short to be a poem? o.o

Everyone’s Enemy

 

You once told me

It’s me and you

Against the world

 

You joined the world

Now I’m against you all

Author's Note

It was in my head as I was walking home from school, I jotted it down when I got home.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

It doesn't matter how long a poem is, it's all about the feelings it shows and this one is outstanding !
The emotion may be negative but the poem is wonderfully written :)
Hope you're gonna make it through !

[Destinyxi]

haha thanks a lot

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Wow, this says so much in such little words. I like this a lot :)

[Destinyxi]

thank you :)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Np :)

[Kes]

Wow, I love it!!
It's so short and simple, but it's so effective!
Amazing.
K

[Joe Morris]

Don't be a sheep! Nice poem :)

[Tate Morgan]

Better to lead than to follow I say

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Very Short and Powerfull indeed..!

[Hester Vane]

I really like this. The end came as a sort of shock which was unexpected and brilliant! Short and Sweet! Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of this poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem and thoughts.
Coyote

[Steven Cash]

Free verse!!!!!!!

[axel]

ha ha lol, nice one