D in Killer

D in Killer

A Poem by Destinyxi

D in Killer

 

Come here

My sweet boy

Let me get high on you

High off of you

Shoot you into my bloodstream

Smoke you till my pupils dilate

Drink you till my words are but a mumble

 

You’re legit

My own personal legal drug

The best kind out there

The kind that gets me off

Gets me on

You make me fly boy

The sky’s the limit

But I’m in another universe

 

F**k the cops if they find me

Find us

Find you

They can’t have you

They can’t use you too

I’m addicted

Take me away from here

Drag me into another world

Your world

 

Ah boy you’re giving me bruises

Where you’re injected

You’re staining my teeth

Where you’re smoked

You’re poisoning my liver

When you’re drunk

 

I’m not here anymore

I’m gone

I’m flying

F**k red bull

You give me wings

 

My sweet boy

Stay here

I’m getting high on you

High off of you

Shooting you till I get bruises

Smoking you till my teeth turn yellow

Drinking you till my liver is poisoned

 

You’re my legit drug

Satan’s addiction

You’re the best kind out there

The kind that kills

© 2012 Destinyxi


Author's Note

Destinyxi
This poem was inspired by Rihanna's music video "We found love".

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I love the attitude in this poem! The imagery and word choice really pack a punch. This is awesome!

Posted 7 Years Ago


sounds enticing......and fun!



Posted 7 Years Ago


it is really nicely written..i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


what an awesome write. almost like dark comedy,but really truthful depends how you interpret it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very nice poem. Need some good music and we could have a song. Nice to dance on the edge. Emotion and desire can lead us to wild and good places. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem packs a heavy punch. Revealing the main source of the evil that's propelling someone into the depths of a desired darkness that's far from reality. Great work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Destinyxi

7 Years Ago

That's a good was of describing drugs haha. Thank you! :)
Haha you got an inspiration from "We found love" Rihanna? Oh, I definitely didn't see that coming! Haha. It's good, and I love it! Your writing keeps getting better and more deeper with a lot of meaning and stories behind them. I love reading your type of writing style! It has some humor and truth behind it, too! Keep up the good work and more poetry like this too! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Destinyxi

7 Years Ago

Yeah, from the music video haha. How Rihanna was so high off her man and the drugs xD

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Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

7 Years Ago

Oh, I haven't ever watched the music video so I wouldn't know. :)
This came from Rihanna? This sounds like the opposite of We found love. I think this poem is about addiction. Great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Destinyxi

8 Years Ago

the music video IS about addiction haha. But yes, so is this poem.
Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

I have never seem the music video lol. With my new phone i can check it out
Destinyxi

8 Years Ago

haha yeah check it out
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Kes
I love this. I really believe that you can be addicted to nearly anything.
This is sweeeeet. :)
K

Posted 8 Years Ago


Destinyxi

8 Years Ago

thanks kes!
you have drugged the words and ideas..you writing is so drugged.like the way you have put it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Destinyxi

8 Years Ago

thank you

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