Playing with Peach

Playing with Peach

A Poem by Destinyxi

Playing with Peach

 

I hear your thoughts

I see your mind

I know what you want

And I know you’ll come and get it

 

You’re the dominant type

That’s great

So am I

It’s a battle of the sexes

Battle of strength

Who’s stronger

Who’s wittier

And who will win

 

Come and play with me

I’m sure there are ways

We can both call it even

Or maybe I can just take the prize

And run off

 

My body is a battleground

Some parts are rougher than most

Some are tougher

And some need more work

 

My body is a playground

Toys and gadgets

Just add more fun

Dig in

Sink in

Take out

Pour out

 

Come out and play

My boy

Is your mama keeping you in?

Or are you man enough to

Come and get

What you want

And show me who the dominant one is

Or will you have the ground

Swallow you whole

And you’ll never see the light

Of a new day

Again 

© 2012 Destinyxi


Author's Note

Destinyxi
I had something else in mind when I started writing the poem, but it trailed off. I'm going to end up writing another poem with a similar topic soon xD

Enjoy!

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I hate to say this but making ones body into a battle ground probably is not such a great idea. As the old love warrior told me, discretion is the better part of survival. But I'm glad you said it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i find this very um sensual and sexual, it conveys you being a strong woman and i capture the idea of you kinda telling said boy to basically grow a pair and be a man, like a girl would like. I don't know maybe he has his own boat and way of doing things, everybody has his own boat.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I tend to start writing about something and then end up writing about something completely different in the end as well, haha. Good write though :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


A lot of challenge in this piece... a woman's perspective on a man - and the excitement of an encounter that has so many possibilities..

You capture a kind of mood so well

Posted 7 Years Ago


LOVE the title! It and the poem are both very playful and teasing. It was cute in a sense. :)

Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Love the title
and the poem. Very playful it is. I don't think I've ever played so myself, maybe that's why I enjoy your writing so, if decidedly different from what I feel and what I experience and on top of that, you state it all so nicely! Great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Enticing, good work on that call of a challenge. I can imagine two people off the top of my head that'd give an incredible show of dominance, sparks would definitely fly haha. I liked the flow, loved the word choice, and there's no flaws in this piece of work as far as I can see. Awesome job as always!

Posted 7 Years Ago


The young woman of today. I'm a old man. Woman were more timid in my young days. I like the honest and directness of the poem. A new world today. Woman and men are walking the same path and want to control all things. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


well done...a chess game of intamacy? perhaps more of a duel of wits in the battle of the sexes ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, Destinyxi you do have a talent in writing sensual and very moving poetry. You pull in your audience's attention with words that plays with their mind. It's true that a girl wants a guy that knows what he wants, and isn't too scared to show that too. Women are known to want and yearn for a strong and outgoing man who's open with feelings and wants. I think the whole idea of the comparison of a playground and your body, you really penned it! It's unique and everyone else wishes that they could've came up with the brilliant idea of yours! Good job, and most definitely keep writing! Don't forget......

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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