Bowing Down

Bowing Down

 

God must have pulled some strings

When he made a man like you

Tall dark and handsome

 

You think he would approve

If I were to worship your broad shoulders

You think he would mind

If I were to memorise every bump and dent of your abs

 

You have these eyes that girls would kill for

And this smile that catches everyone’s attention

But it’s what they can’t see, that’s so close to perfect

 

Under those clothes, you have this sculpted body

I can’t help running my hands over

Having my tongue and my teeth scrape over

 

My hands do something to you

But they don’t get the reaction I want

It’s when I use my full lips and wicked tongue

That you start humming in delight

 

The music that comes out of you

It takes every ounce of my strength

To continue what I’m doing

And not straddle you like a horse

And ride till your legs give in

 

When I get you alone

Oh, when I get you alone

It’ll be you

Screaming to the Gods

Asking if he approves of my actions

Asking if what you feel is normal

 

The pleasure

 

At that point, my baby

I wouldn’t care about any God

 

I’d be worshipping you

No one else

Author's Note

I've had a few people ask me to get cracking on a new erotic piece, this one isn't too erotic and blunt so it's rated Teen. If anyone thinks it should be rated otherwise then let me know.

I'm sure many women will have a man come to mind when reading this poem haha

Enjoy!

Reviews

[The 13th Eros]

There's an intensity that builds in your heat; in your thriving desires. One wild drive into the unleashed cravings can be sensually spiritual for sure. Bowing.

[Joe]

Yeah A Cracking Erotic Write!
Love It!

Fav Lines:

"When I get you alone
Oh, when I get you alone
It’ll be you
Screaming to the Gods
Asking if he approves of my actions
Asking if what you feel is normal" / Ahhhhh Hmmm You Made me Fantasize :)

Lovely, Sexy Write, Dest! :)

[B-poet]

Being submissive to your man's dearest desires is the theme that stands out in this nice work of yours. Very well penned. Great work. :)

[Junert]

It's perfect. Writing erotica professionally draws more dignity than being overly explicit.

[Hester Vane]

Yes one man has definatley sprung to my mind. I think the rating is fine, its definatley not the most xrated of your pieces that ive read! :-) But still, brilliant as always. The power in the description you use is second to none. Great stuff.

[gombeggar]

very sensuous fer sure, girl...not too naughty but it does let the mind wander for your actions as u write them, so good work

[Invisible]

i don't know if such a man exists, and if he does, he's a total dick. besides, those three things don't always happen to one man. like i'm pretty tall, and i have dark thoughts and dark hair, but i'm nowhere close to being considered handsome. then there's guys like brad pitt who might be tall, but aren't dark haired really, yet most women find them handsome. my point is perfection is all a matter of opinion, usually a majority rules based opinion, and not an actual fact.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yeah. It's an erotic poem alright.

[Destinyxi]

haha, yeah it is

[John Alexander McFadyen]

yes a nice piece with a very sensual theme and extreme desire!

[Destinyxi]

thank you!

[That_Girl]

Teen works, it's pretty mild.

Unfortunately yes, ACTUALLY! Two come to mind... hmmm you wicked girl. ;)

Nice to see you posting this instead of another depressing piece lol ;)

[Destinyxi]

Haha, was waiting for your comment doll ;)

Thank you. These are much more fun to write

[That_Girl]

Sorry! I didn't see the post right away. What's up with you NEVER visiting me anymore?! :( lol