MIA

MIA

 

Would you miss me

If I disappeared tomorrow

 

Would there be enough memories

For you to convince yourself

I ever existed

 

Do you care enough

To notice something is missing

Someone

 

Would you regret

Some of the things you’ve told me

Some of the ways you’ve acted

 

Would you think about me

Wonder what I’m doing

How I am

Where I am

 

Would you come looking for me

Or would you forget

All about me

 

Would you miss me

If in a second

I would be gone

And you couldn’t reach me

Ever again

 

Would you miss me

The way I do you

 

Because I never miss you

The way you do me

 

Author's Note

The beauty of writing while you're feeling down. I hope you guys like it.

Please comment and review :)

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I've answered this question a few times over the years hun...you mean the world to a lot of people and you would be devastatingly missed if you were no longer here...I'm not sure if it's addressed to anyone in particular but whenever I do read a poem of yours that has a lot of questions in it, I always think it's the same person...the last four lines really made me think, in fact, I'm still thinking about it...you sound confused...I've also lamented many times in the past over how much better you are at cheering me up than the other way around...but I'm here for anything you want to talk about, and always will be.

[Destinyxi]

I was debating to put the last four lines actually. I had finished the poem, re read it, then added them.

You cheer me up in your own way. And I'm very grateful for that

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure my dear, I'm just glad I can help you in some way.

[gombeggar]

wonderful emote with a dark ending that kinda confuses...but good writ nonetheless

[Destinyxi]

Thank you gom!

[Ees]

Writing is so much easier when down. It's one of those tragic truths of life I suppose. Nicely done poem. I feel lucky that this is the first that I have clicked on in ages and ages of being away from this whole thing.
If I were you, I'd take a look at the third to last stanza. Just one little place that felt sticky, but the rest is perfect the way that it is as far as I can tell.
great job

[Destinyxi]

Yeah, I agree that it's easier when you're down. When I'm happy I don't write as much.

I'm glad my poem was a first and that it didn't suck haha.

I looked at the third to last stanza, I agree it's not as smooth as the rest. But once I finish writing a poem, unless there's a typo, I don't touch it.

Thank you though Ees for reviewing :) I appreciate it

[Ees]

Hahah.
that's cool, just throwing it out there.
I don't write s**t when I am happy unless it is some sort of insane manic sort of happy- delusional stuff. haha.
I am super glad this was the first I got to read after being away for so long!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Total master piece, everything fits, there is so much for interpretation, definitely putting it as favorite, Congratulations.

[Destinyxi]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it enough to favorite it haha. :)

[John Stussy]

As always, your writing is spot on and evokes strong sensations. I find it hard to think that anyone would find it hard to miss you at all, since you rock. This was a great poem, and I hope that writing your thoughts out helped give you some peace of mind.

[Destinyxi]

Thank you so much Johnny boy. I'm glad you liked it :)

[John Stussy]

Always a pleasure to read your work.