MIA

MIA

A Poem by Destinyxi

MIA

 

Would you miss me

If I disappeared tomorrow

 

Would there be enough memories

For you to convince yourself

I ever existed

 

Do you care enough

To notice something is missing

Someone

 

Would you regret

Some of the things you’ve told me

Some of the ways you’ve acted

 

Would you think about me

Wonder what I’m doing

How I am

Where I am

 

Would you come looking for me

Or would you forget

All about me

 

Would you miss me

If in a second

I would be gone

And you couldn’t reach me

Ever again

 

Would you miss me

The way I do you

 

Because I never miss you

The way you do me

 

© 2013 Destinyxi


Author's Note

Destinyxi
The beauty of writing while you're feeling down. I hope you guys like it.

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I've answered this question a few times over the years hun...you mean the world to a lot of people and you would be devastatingly missed if you were no longer here...I'm not sure if it's addressed to anyone in particular but whenever I do read a poem of yours that has a lot of questions in it, I always think it's the same person...the last four lines really made me think, in fact, I'm still thinking about it...you sound confused...I've also lamented many times in the past over how much better you are at cheering me up than the other way around...but I'm here for anything you want to talk about, and always will be.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destinyxi

9 Years Ago

I was debating to put the last four lines actually. I had finished the poem, re read it, then added .. read more
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Always a pleasure my dear, I'm just glad I can help you in some way.



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wonderful emote with a dark ending that kinda confuses...but good writ nonetheless

Posted 9 Years Ago


Destinyxi

9 Years Ago

Thank you gom!
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Writing is so much easier when down. It's one of those tragic truths of life I suppose. Nicely done poem. I feel lucky that this is the first that I have clicked on in ages and ages of being away from this whole thing.
If I were you, I'd take a look at the third to last stanza. Just one little place that felt sticky, but the rest is perfect the way that it is as far as I can tell.
great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Destinyxi

9 Years Ago

Yeah, I agree that it's easier when you're down. When I'm happy I don't write as much.

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Ees

9 Years Ago

Hahah.
that's cool, just throwing it out there.
I don't write s**t when I am happy unles.. read more
Total master piece, everything fits, there is so much for interpretation, definitely putting it as favorite, Congratulations.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Destinyxi

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it enough to favorite it haha. :)
I've answered this question a few times over the years hun...you mean the world to a lot of people and you would be devastatingly missed if you were no longer here...I'm not sure if it's addressed to anyone in particular but whenever I do read a poem of yours that has a lot of questions in it, I always think it's the same person...the last four lines really made me think, in fact, I'm still thinking about it...you sound confused...I've also lamented many times in the past over how much better you are at cheering me up than the other way around...but I'm here for anything you want to talk about, and always will be.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destinyxi

9 Years Ago

I was debating to put the last four lines actually. I had finished the poem, re read it, then added .. read more
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Always a pleasure my dear, I'm just glad I can help you in some way.
As always, your writing is spot on and evokes strong sensations. I find it hard to think that anyone would find it hard to miss you at all, since you rock. This was a great poem, and I hope that writing your thoughts out helped give you some peace of mind.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Destinyxi

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Johnny boy. I'm glad you liked it :)
John Stussy

9 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to read your work.

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