Just Go

Just Go

 

Why cant you just

Get off my mind

Leave my thoughts

Walk out of them

Step away from my world

You’re always interfering

With my imagination

Always walking into

The bubble of my thoughts

And dancing around

Smiling at me

Making me feel like

Such a fool

Why cant you just

Let me be

For once

Leave me alone

Get away from me

I tire of this

I tire of these thoughts

Of these what ifs

I tire of you

I don’t need you

Constantly coming around

And having me question

Every

Little

Thing

When just yesterday

I was so damn sure

Just go

It’s been months

Just go

Why cant you

Just

Go

Reviews

[K-mo]

wow this is really good!

[Monica]

I know it's hard to let go, forget, move on...it sucks. You have written your feelings beautifully, full of strength for your desire to have this man out of your life, your mind...just out!
This poem flows nicely and is well penned! Great job! Keep writing :)

[M]

It's really hard to let go even when we want to. This is also a really candid poem filled with a flurry of emotions that takes the reader for quite a ride.

[MoriartyMesa]

I can see this as a Donna's song, fast rifts, girl scream band, nice drum solo.
RockNRoll w Lipstick.

[S. Michael Long]

i like this and can relate to it.. i have been trying to take out my "trash" for months but it keeps coming back one way or another lol (: nice write. . -s

[justjenn_2u]

I love the honesty and you have created an interesting flow of words here. Write on.

[Luciole]

Really loved the structure. I definitely can relate to this. Awesome job here :)

[Kes]

Heartfelt.
Great work.
K

[Lumière Dé..]

That one person you want. Your head says 'You'll never have them' but your heart says 'maybe one day'.
It's hard. Beautiful poem :)

[khalid]

sometimes we love somebody the degree that we may want them leave us. they may keep on threatening us of leaving. i can understand the feeling you had when you have written this poem...

i have really enjoyed reading this poem...great writing really...
thank you for sharing...