Here it comes

Here it comes

A Poem by Devansh Shekhar Shukla
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As the shadows grow tall,
And the blue turns red,
Here it comes, the calming, balmy evening.

© 2020 Devansh Shekhar Shukla


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Beautiful - nature is a balm - very lovely and concise piece :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Uhhhh paints a mental image of dawn. I love it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


I love how you personify the coming of evening so we can watch it tiptoe in. I love how you pay attention to how your words sound together: "calming balmy evening" . . . I would prefer to say shadows grow LONG (instead of TALL), but your message is striking the way it is, too! Happy New Year! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


Very good use of words Devansh. You said a handful in so few lines. When night comes. The quiet part of the day is here. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Coyote for reading and reviewing!
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Hello !! So the poem is really deep but
I wanna ask you that do you know about the scientific aspect of blue turning red..
According to Einstein whenever any object in a fast speed moves away it seems red and if it comes towards us , the light reflected by it seems to be blue ...
Until I didn't read your last line I thought that it means the same I wrote so I was confused ... But the last line changed the whole game ... I like that ... please if you get some time please read my new poem ❣❣

Posted 5 Months Ago


Anushka joshi

5 Months Ago

Ohh !! nice I am a NEET aspirant for 2021 . 🤍🤍
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Months Ago

Are you a repeater?
Anushka joshi

5 Months Ago

No , I am currently in my 12th standard from CBSE board
As the moonlight rises so does dawn sets. I so can relate with this love this poem added some in my review to your poem felt your emotion and it inspired me thank so much love this.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Months Ago

Let me tell you that you made my day :)
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Months Ago

Thanks for the review!
Pink Pastel

5 Months Ago

Your welcome darling have a great day
very well written and said

Posted 5 Months Ago


Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Months Ago

Thanks Kim! Is your hand good now?
To the point and beautifully written. Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

6 Months Ago

I'm really glad you liked it :)
A wonderfully written sweet and simple poem which is definitely a good one :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Devansh Shekhar Shukla

6 Months Ago

Thanks a lot Anjeline!
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Here it comes...a beautiful lil poem with a great big calming balmy punch...I love it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the beautiful review :)
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7 Months Ago

My pleasure...really enjoyed it:)

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Added on August 6, 2020
Last Updated on August 10, 2020
Tags: Evening, Nature, Poem, Poet, Beautiful

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Devansh Shekhar Shukla
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

Lucknow, India



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