Letters/Colors

Letters/Colors

A Poem by Red Crown

How are you girl in yellow clothing?
Your smile is beautiful as always

I just couldn't forget your eyes
How they shown kindness towards me
How their green made the whole land around me gray
Beautiful, more than any jewel

Hey...

Please, don't change anymore ok?
Even though you want to be taller
I like you just like this

Even though you say you're not perfect
I think you really are
Because when I was with you
Not a single piece was out of place

Do you remember what I said?
I wanted to be a king
I would become strong and rich
thus, I would be happy

But we laughed together
we smiled together all the time
And I could hold your hand

So... I'm sorry

But I guess I lied

Just because I was with you...
I had everything I always wanted

_________________________________________________________________________

How are you boy in red clothing?
Why you always says so many stupid things to me?

You know...
I'll grow and become beautiful!
Then... I won't have to tip-toe to you

So, it's you who can't change anymore
Because I'll remember you how you are
And I want to laugh when I see you surprised

But... even if you change a bit
I'll surely find you again

And if you don't smile when you see me again
I'll never... never forgive you!

Because...



I love you

© 2010 Red Crown


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Aww, that was such a sweet write. There was something so simple yet so affectionate about this poem that I liked, and I thought that you did a fantastic job in conveying how truly smitten you can be in a relationship. I loved the stanza "Even though you say you're not perfect/I think you really are/Because when I was with you/Not a single piece was out of place"; it pretty much epitomises my relationship right now. :) Great work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoyed this, warms the heart :). I love the last part:And if you don't smile when you see me again
I'll never... never forgive you!

Because...



I love you

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like your style of writing - it's very droll.
nevertheless i love it :)
continue writing or else risk putting good talent to waste!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i Agree with paperhearts. Have you gotten any of the read reviews i sent you for my poems i am guessing no. But i feel in love with this was so cute i simply love this . God bless lily



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, that was such a sweet write. There was something so simple yet so affectionate about this poem that I liked, and I thought that you did a fantastic job in conveying how truly smitten you can be in a relationship. I loved the stanza "Even though you say you're not perfect/I think you really are/Because when I was with you/Not a single piece was out of place"; it pretty much epitomises my relationship right now. :) Great work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 4, 2010
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Tags: love, distance, memory, happy, happiness, change, cute

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