The only truth

The only truth

A Poem by Red Crown

Hey

They say I'm alone
That my dreams are gone
That I shouldn't rely on you

But how many times we had to think?
Wasn't it just enough to know
Our hearts were happy to be bound by love

I really want to say
That I'm an exception to this rule

Even though you were a dream
Our feelings are really true

Look at the sky above
As fall the rain
As we remain

Together and alive
As we have hold our hands

They say dreams aren't true
Illusion lands
Misunderstands

"Only a fool would live on what they say"

And if they are right?
If I'm lame
A broken frame

I just couldn't care less
Because the undeniable truth
Is that I will always

and always

Have loved you

© 2010 Red Crown


Author's Note

Red Crown
After all... I guess I can only write things involving romance, but it's pretty much everything I feel like writing.

I always listen people saying that no one really knows what love is, before anyone says that again for me I'll have to say... I completely disagree with you. Also, I don't think there's more than one way to describe love and don't believe in love at first sight.

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I liked this a lot. It had a real sense of maturity and wisdom to it which made it both a relatable and thought-provoking write. At first, I found the flow of the piece a little bit awkward, but as the poem progressed and I grasped the hang of it, I actually found myself enjoying it. Your wording was beautiful, and I really loved the lines 'Illusion lands/Misunderstands'. Great work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked this a lot. It had a real sense of maturity and wisdom to it which made it both a relatable and thought-provoking write. At first, I found the flow of the piece a little bit awkward, but as the poem progressed and I grasped the hang of it, I actually found myself enjoying it. Your wording was beautiful, and I really loved the lines 'Illusion lands/Misunderstands'. Great work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem...mixing free verse with a couplet here and there. A great switch up! Good meter and flow...and a good message...believe in love even if others don't.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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