She is beautiful

She is beautiful.
Her elegant eyes so profound as though allowing me to forsee all the way into her heart.
A delicate heart hidden in desolate passions.
One which my heart could spend eternity longing to love had i been immortal.
Her prevalent smile so radiant i swear feeling it brighten my soul,
Magnifying the beauty of the sole creator himself.
I cant resist but smile back to its infectious affection.
Her eloquent voice a harmonious sonnet to my ears.
A melody so godly,
She's got to be an Angel.
An angel sent to answer my prayers perhaps.
Her temperate touch,
Oh My!
A sweet caress of ecstasy.One which erupts an unfathomable
rush of adrenaline,
Undulating my hearts desires.
Is this seventh heaven?
I pinch myself to make sure i'm awake and find myself still mesmerised by this Angel.
How can i not ask her out?,
for she is beautiful.

Author's Note

Whats your take?

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's a saying, that men fall in love with their eyes, and women fall in love with their hearts.

"...her eloquent voice a harmonious sonnet to my ears.
A melody so godly,
she's got to be an Angel."

So lovely, Nkosana, and so poetic!


My best,
Kelly

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you so very much for the kind
review Kelly.im glad you took the time
to read and emjoyed it.Appreciate it
lots

[SyberRose]

Her eloquent voice a harmonious sonnet to my ears.

A lovely romantic piece you have penned...Enjoyed very much...Rose

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Rose i appreciaye the review a lot :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Rose i appreciaye the review a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

You're welcome

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...

[Lydia Shutter]

Dreamy and romantic, your words are lacy and velvety soft. Lydi**