Observations

Observations

A Poem by Ellen Randall
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A short poem I wrote on my typewriter while feeling anxious, it best expresses my thoughts at the time.

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Hard nails scratch against soft skin,
Loose hair pulled back tightly with elastic,
A cold body bathes in warm waters,
Screams fill the head of the silent,
And anxiety weakens the heart of a lion.

© 2014 Ellen Randall


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Awesome, so haunting in depth and hue, this piece is excellent, kept me reading, wishing for more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellen Randall

9 Years Ago

Thank you x
I miss my old typewriter...the font...the click sounds...but I'm all about progression...I love how you describe anxiousness...and anxiety is spontaneous.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellen Randall

9 Years Ago

Type writers are just really fun because they are so instant but I understand what you mean!
T.. read more
Babe Roxx

9 Years Ago

OMG! Yes...it is fun, right. Sigh, I miss my portable and electric typewriter. Nonetheless, I'm happ.. read more

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Added on July 19, 2014
Last Updated on July 19, 2014
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Ellen Randall
Ellen Randall

Kerala, Kerala, India



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