Rush

Something covered in my Creative Writing class was Tiny Fiction.

Rush. Dart between columns. Leap over stray dogs and men. Turn left in that alley�"the one with the Mary Mural. Nod at baby Jesus as you pass and doge that pile of cardboard boxes. You’re doing great, just a little farther. Scale that fence�"careful, it likes to snag clothing. Use that pole to swing left�"you don’t want to slam into that wall. Okay, there’s the door�"don’t knock, just open it. You’re just in time for dinner. Did you remember to buy the milk?

Reviews

[Elim]

This was so innocent and cute, and nearly exactly portrays a child's simple thoughts. There are a few errors but those can easily be fixed. I really like the ending, too. This whole story just makes me smile.