A Special Day

You all celebrate your birthday each year because you know how important it is for you .

      

There's a day to remember,

A very special day for you.

That will always make you wonder,

What it meant to you.

The day when you are born,

I bet you don't remember anything.

Still you'll always be celebrating that day, 

Because that day is truly important to you all way.

You opened your tiny eyes for the first time,

And saw how the beautiful sun shine.

You are a gift , send by the God,

So always remember you are very special, not odd,

That was the day when your father and mother were the happiest,

who will always be there to help you in sorrow and loneliness. 

You also smiled for the first time,

without knowing what is good and what is bad.

You moved your hands and legs in all direction,

because you have to grow in a perfection.

Tired , Happy and smiling you slept,

and opened your eyes the next day.

Leaving that very important first day ,

That you don't even remember.

But still it is a very special day for you,

and will always be celebrating that day forever.

Author's Note

Writing a poem for the first time

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' You are a gift , send by the God, ~ So always remember you are very special, not odd, .. '

What a lovely poem! Makes such a change to read gentle and thankful words. To show folk what's important. Maybe we could remember how it was to be innocent and full of goodness rather all those terrible flaws we take on board through life. Gentle applause and a heartfelt THANK YOU..

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thanks for appreciating that phrase .
also thank you for your generous review

[lexgremlin88]

Aw, I really like this poem :) makes me smile :) x

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thankyou :)

[TL Boehm]

Nicely done especially if this is a first poem for you. I still remember the birth of my children - it was more special than I can articulate.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Children are special for their mom and dad :D thanks :)

[Amanda Eckhoff]

This poem was beautiful. So true. An individuals birthday is their most important day. It did give them life after all. :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Celebrating his/her birthday makes that individual the happiest . THANKS :)

[Krystal17]

This has a lovely flow. It's really nicely written. I loved it :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks a lot

[Krystal17]

no worries :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Makes much sense to me while reading it..
When you born you have no tone.. as you grow you have one.. When you are born.
You father's eyes glitters and mother cares flow..
You need to have single aim to keep them happy as the time flows.

Loved your poem dear.. much sensible lines and way better flow :)

Keep writing better ones.
Smiles,
Singh :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks :)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome :)

[Muse]

As a mother..reading this warms my heart. So very true.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Wow !! It feels amazing when a real MOTHER says that ... Thanks a LOt ! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a great poem. It makes me want to celebrate life.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thanks :)

[MaliKate]

This is an awesome attempt for your first poem. I can't say I know what this is like though since I've never been a parent. And I'm very awkward around babies though I can't wait to have my own.

Good work :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

you will be the best mom ;)

[MaliKate]

Haha! Thank you :D Sure hope so :P

[smilempsn]

If this is your first time.. then way to go dear...
That was a nice piece penned down ^-^

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Hope for the better next time . Thank you