A Special Day

A Special Day

A Poem by Divyanshu Kachhap
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You all celebrate your birthday each year because you know how important it is for you .

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There's a day to remember,
A very special day for you.
That will always make you wonder,
What it meant to you.

The day when you are born,
I bet you don't remember anything.
Still you'll always be celebrating that day, 
Because that day is truly important to you all way.

You opened your tiny eyes for the first time,
And saw how the beautiful sun shine.
You are a gift , send by the God,
So always remember you are very special, not odd,

That was the day when your father and mother were the happiest,
who will always be there to help you in sorrow and loneliness. 
You also smiled for the first time,
without knowing what is good and what is bad.
You moved your hands and legs in all direction,
because you have to grow in a perfection.

Tired , Happy and smiling you slept,
and opened your eyes the next day.
Leaving that very important first day ,
That you don't even remember.
But still it is a very special day for you,
and will always be celebrating that day forever.

© 2013 Divyanshu Kachhap


Author's Note

Divyanshu Kachhap
Writing a poem for the first time

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' You are a gift , send by the God, ~ So always remember you are very special, not odd, .. '

What a lovely poem! Makes such a change to read gentle and thankful words. To show folk what's important. Maybe we could remember how it was to be innocent and full of goodness rather all those terrible flaws we take on board through life. Gentle applause and a heartfelt THANK YOU..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

Thanks for appreciating that phrase .
also thank you for your generous review


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I really like the poem. It has simple but awesome thoughts :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

Thanks you :)
Pallavi Chaturvedi

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Wow! Welcome to WC. This is a nice poem as your first attempt.
Keep it up. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot .. and lets see what my next poem has to say :)
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Pax
We may forget our first scene whe we come out in this world, but our parents will always remember those times... those special moments, forevere treasured by our love ones ~ we may not be the perfect ones in the eyes of many but to our parents we are... because we are love by them...

wonderful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

Truly appreciate !

thanks for the review :) .
Very sweet and cute. Nicely penned. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

thanks for appreciating my first try :)
Though the first two stanzas sound oddly repetitive, the last three stanzas would be echoing in the head of every reader, given the fact that you have given your first attempt. A nice read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

Thanks to tell me about my mistakes :D
Shivam Murari

11 Years Ago

:)
Wow,Lovely write:)
I can totally relate to your piece...
We always wish for our special day to come:)
Keep writing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

I always wanted to relate my piece to the audience.. thanks a lot
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

You are always welcome ..take care :)
Well for a first attempt you are to be congratulated. It's a very sweet poem, a beautiful thought. Unfortunately those lovely little creatures usually grow up to be hellfire brats - lol. I should know, I had seven of them, plus 24 grandchildren and 4 great grandchildren. But don't we love 'em all!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your generous review sir ... I will try to improve a lot in coming days :)
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Holy Cats Mr Paget left a review.
Muse

11 Years Ago

Wow! He really did? Sorry David...I couldn't help but chyme in. Ask Tate..he knows I'll give anybod.. read more

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Divyanshu Kachhap

Hazaribagh, Jharkhand, India



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