13th December

Dedicated to my one and only IDOL . TAYLOR SWIFT

               

The day I remember , was someday middle of December .

My Birthday was near but  ,  my excitement lie not there.

I did planned what to do for that very special day,

After all she just "BELONG WITH ME"  I wanted to say.

She made me CRAZIER ever since I met her,

But I am still not sure what to say to that girl !

She only taught me "We should not wait , We should speak now!".

And I only wanted to say her , but how ?

 

She was singing a LOVE STORY song,when I first met her.

I did thought that the song was for me, but I was wrong!, it was for an another sir!

But now she says  “  EVERYTHING  WILL  BE  ALRIGHT  , IF YOU KEEP ME NEXT TO YOU”

But why don't she understand that this I always do.

She was TWENTY TWO and I was just sixteen.

That day was just a day behind when she will turn twenty three and four days later I’ll be seventeen

After struggling hard to keep my EYES OPEN I finally closed my eyes and waited for the next day to arise.

At 3:00 a.m. I opened my eyes and rushed to get my mobile

Thinking that I am the first one to wish her.

But unlucky me , I was too late

And on Twitter I just wrote...

@taylorswift13 HAPPY BIRTHDAY TAYLOR !!

Author's Note

1.Ignore grammar problems
2.colored words are some of the songs by Taylor Swift .
3. truly dedicated this to my Idol TAYLOR SWIFT

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I am a big fan of Taylor Swift, too. In fact, some of the songs that I have written were influenced by her. Hmm, as for the content of this poem, it's cool that you included her songs and wrote a narrative about her. You mentioned in the author's note to "ignore grammar problems"... However, any reader would be distracted to see grammatical errors in any form of writing (no matter how good the content may be). Improve on grammar and you'll be able to write better. :) Keep writing! And thanks for sharing! :x

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks a lot !! i will surely try to improve my grammer :)

[Kristin Lee]

Very cute. She's a popular girl.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks :) .. yaa she is really very popular and is the best

[annie lee]

A very ardent dedication.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks a lot !!

[Bowers]

I really enjoyed this poem, it was so sweet, I love how you wrote to Taylor, about Taylor... you expressed your feelings in the perfect way, it was a beautiful write!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Yes !! I love her a lot :)

[Bowers]

she does have a beautiful voice! :)

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

Awesome!
by reading first stanza I thought you are talking about some ordinary girl :P
well! nice creation. I like it very much, especially highlighted words :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

I wanted to keep it as a secret till the end !! and I somehow managed to do that :) Thanks for appreciating it !

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

yup! surly you succeeded in that :)
and you are most welcome.

[Muse]

Puppy love, we've all been there. Some day you will wake up.

Promise.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a fun tribute to Taylor Swift! I like the colored fonts for the song titles.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Just a colorful way to express my feelings :)

[moog-drika]

awww its a really sweet poem....
I love taylor swift too ^_^

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah teen crushes. We're all had them. Mine was Christina Aguilera. Good poem

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Christina is nice too but for me its TAYLOR

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is cute, DK. Nice tribute to your idol. You're creative. Keep it up!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thankyou !! DK sounds so nice :)