Stars With Destiny

Stars With Destiny

A Poem by DizzyLlama

Time pulls it's transfixed pulse of voids consolated into a gigantic absence. This spoken drama playes as if it is broken down syllable by syllable. I don't know what to do. I left my mind for one hell of a ride, now what do I have to show? My skills harnessed so unique, now they lost their wau home. I must go searching for the parts I scattered through the world.

© 2015 DizzyLlama


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Interesting paragraph, I'm not sure I understand the premiss of your story line but it sounds very cool when I read it out loud. I could see this being developed into a heck of a story. Thank you for posting and allowing us to read your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


DizzyLlama

8 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the tine to read and comment on my work! I always enjoy others opinions about w.. read more

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Added on June 26, 2015
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