...And Go!

Deeper feelings cause greater pain
Everything changes, similar standerds
Bodys pressed as one to coax the other
Palms so sweaty held together so tightly
We gaze into one another
Not with our eyes but soul
For the first time silly romantic tunes make me move
Nothing can change us, nor will it ever
Together we are infinite

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

That is the true form of live. When you love someone, don't look only for the appearance, for the soul is what really matters. I like this sentence: "Nothing can change us, nor will it ever". This is something that must not be forgotten by people who love, for love is something that can even endure the end of the world. The strength of love is something that depends on the heart of the person. When i read this poem, I concluded that you are someone who possesses a strong heart.

Good job :D

[Ranger Nadaly]

I love the last line. Reminds me of perks of being a wallflower. Standards is spelled with an a not an e