Pirate Bull Fight

Cold and distant lands
Became one with a man
He knew
He knew
To find the map
To take him to gold
Lead them he must
To their graves
He swore a fight
It would start that night
Bring your money
Cuz its gonna be a quick one
Don't hide, don't worry
Ive got a pocket and integrity

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

This poem filled my mind with powerful images of a sci-fi or fantasy movie. Short it may be, but a punch it sure packed. I recommend to implement some more powerful words in your poem, for it would increase the intensity of your poem but use it sparingly or else your poem will be flooded and lose its power.