Luckily

Luckily

A Poem by Doa'a Tq
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Lucky of having uncountable hours, sharing them together

Lucky to have been with my best friend for a long duration

To each every single moment I spend with you, I keep smiling

Lucky for having more days to wake up, breathe again

My words are written to let my soul breath while you are in the other life, how much my heart is lucky for having this breathing soul!

Lucky to these friends who surround my world, spread their magic till I become a part of that magic!

Luckily, I hear constantly, I'm alongside you till the end

Hear me out, each every single word I wrote, I'll say it to you cause I'm still waiting for your compliment

From Saturday till Friday, from 6a.m till 12a.m you will listen to me, then I'm more lucky than any time.

All I own now, my words and they're written by an empty hands.

I'm deeply sorry that now you're not here with me.

Even if I believe that we're not at the same life, but it's so painful,
That you can't read my words, you can't listen to me more.

I see you in my dreams look at me, oblige me to smile

But at the end of my dream you say "catch you later", I open my eyes then I see another world!

My days with you were an authentic life
Dear best friend, all my wishes that I can hear you once again,
Smile at me once again!

By the way, lucky for knowing you…

#Doaa_Tq ツ

© 2016 Doa'a Tq


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Having lost people too I love the message. I had to read it twice to be sure I understood correctly. I like the idea but wish the words where a little more passionate. I think you could have dug in a little deeper. Overall I liked it though.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Doa'a Tq

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your understanding. I will do on your advise cause that what I need from publishing my wr.. read more

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Added on August 24, 2016
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Doa'a Tq
Doa'a Tq

Sana'a, Islam, Yemen



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