Hot Summer's Day

Hot Summer's Day

A Poem by Some Random Person.
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What a Summer day feels like in Arkansas

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A hot summer’s day,

Hot as can be,

How can we stand,

The summer’s heat wave,

Oh, joy! Here comes rain,

Rain as hard as hail,

Covering the hot, humid summer’s ground,

Another hot summer’s day.

© 2010 Some Random Person.


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I like it:) Very good!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good start, keep going, get more detailed

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I live in south Texas and every time it rains it's like a state holiday! I completely relate with the imagery here. Wonderfully simple :) Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's really good. I also like how simple it was, but in England it just rains. We never really have heat with it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good, but where I live, the rain lasts for like 2 minutes and just brings humidity and steam up from the ground, making a Hot Summer's Day just...sucky. I like how simple this was, keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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