Ode to the helpless

I've been seeing all these crime shows and... well this is what came out. Enjoy!

The darkness of the earth swallows us each
As we scream and claw, we hear mocking laughter
Later the monster will give a well rehearsed speech
Then he'll just be turned loose after

The worms eat into our corpse as we sleep
He's sitting in a hotel in Vegas, preying on another soul
Slowly and surely to the helpless being he creeps
Later, he throws her in a far off hole

Our flesh is slowly decaying as we dream
He finally gets a taste of his own game
Now nothing is as it seems
Another killer put to shame

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I like this whole poem, but especially that last line.╰☆╮

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love your writing style, your a really talented poet. :-)

Kaze~

[Matching Socks]

I like your unique style. Reads like a story.
:) Very dark, thought provoking.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

:) why thank you ^*^ I'm so glad you liked it :)

[Matching Socks]

'Twas my pleasure...

[SADS]

I really really enjoyed this. The style is one that's older and less used anymore and it adds to the authenticity of the uniqueness in my opinion. Well done

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it ^*^

[SADS]

I actually just went back and read this again I liked it so much

[Kyori Kia]

Once again an excellent poem. I like your style as well.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I'm so glad you liked it :D it just flows lol, I write what I feel :)

[Kyori Kia]

That's usually how the greatest poems are made