Tears in a snowflake

Tears in a snowflake

A Poem by Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot
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Well, haven't written a poem in so long... here goes nothing...

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 It's been three years since your voice entered my head
              Christmas time isn't what is use to be
     I try to remember the last thing you said
    It all seems to be getting too dark to see

    Tears roll down my pale, blank face
     I look through the halls to glimpse at the past
    This is now just a very dark place
     It's all just happened so fast

     Voices in my head scream out dark things
    I fall onto the bed with a cry
      One of the voices is yours, it devilishly sings
    "Why couldn't you save me.... why"

© 2014 Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot


Author's Note

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot
Christmas is really hard ever since pappy passed away :/

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A stunning write. Evokes powerful emotion. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


the melancholy is echoing. Your pain has aggressively been painted by u . i liked the title but i would suggest u to edit few lines to make it even more beautiful . I can understand when we write in the flow of emotions we just write it staright away.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Gotham , NJ



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