Have the lambs stopped screaming?

I'm in a horror mood today..... hope you enjoy!

 Help me change the world to my own

     

All the darkness will spill through the streets like blood

    

Nothing will come between my creation and I

     

Never will my darling detective and I be apart 

    

I will make all the slime of the world cease

     

Be my experiment, oh delicate flower

    

A little longer and you will be complete

    

Listen... do you hear what I hear

Look into the darkest corners of your mind

   

Everything that hides in the darkness screams

    

Calmness floods into my veins

   

To be insane is a feat only the weak possess

     

Everything will be clear to you soon

   

Relax... your struggle is over

Reviews

[Bluefire]

I find myself going back to this poem a lot and rereading it, but never finding anything to say. It's unique and, well, not so much scary as abnormal or twisted. Twisted always makes for good horror. Well played, anywho! ^^

[Relic]

The dominating character is what stands out here. Nicely done horror poem.

[Violet Stone]

Totally awesome, you can really feel the chill up your spine as you read the words. Great piece of work from a great poet :3

[Brandon S. Whitten]

One of my favorite movies. Excellent read and write.