Journey of Theia

Journey of Theia

A Poem by Wolf Paws

I travel the Solar System
Orbiting in circles 
Saying hi to my brothers 
Earth, Mars, Venus, all of them
We are far, very far from eachother
Except for brother Earth
 Who's on the same track as me
 
Mother sun, she's calling my name 
She fears somthing terrible 
Then I see Earth face on in my orbit
Now I know mother was right about my fate
We crash, destroying me out of existence
Brother lives but barely alive 
My depris spin, revolve around him 
Over time, rocks and dust collect
 Forming a ball of rock 

As my mist flows around the belt
Brother Earth will always have a piece of me in his pelt
If you want to see the mists of my cry
All you have to do is look at the brightest thing in the sky at night

© 2014 Wolf Paws


Author's Note

Wolf Paws
This was the story of the planets: Theia and Earth in the Great Bombardment. A area in time where hundreds of proto planets crash into each other creating our known eight planets and five dwarf planets.

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An interesting poem that brings in some vivid imagery in it's tale. Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very well done. You told it like a fable which made it fun to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow, this is one amazing poem. Very visual!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awesome poem. Love the story in it, reads like a fable or legend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing. Question is, Is it true?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wolf Paws

7 Years Ago

Its a scientific theory that the moon was created by a planet they called Thea that smashed into the.. read more
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7 Years Ago

Wow. I never knew that. Thanks for telling me. lol. I love the poem. :)
WOW!!!that is amazing!!!i is mysterious and really makes you think.excellent work as always:)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Wolf Paws

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