White Moon

White Moon

A Poem by Wolf Paws

I looked at the sky 
I saw something odd
The moon itself brighter 

I stopped in my tracks 
And blinked twice more
I took it as a sign 
I wished...

...For love... 

© 2013 Wolf Paws


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Wonderfully simple and wistful. Who doesn't long for love at one time or another? Great job.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Great write.
love is we all need
but here people no more care for the people and the love in their hearts...~

Posted 6 Years Ago


Just great...Good Job Mister Dog drawler

Posted 6 Years Ago


A nice and creative poem. Wishing for love...it's even more important than money if we stop and admit it. I enjoyed this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Star Wolf

6 Years Ago

Thanks. Glad I finally made it back on here.
Wolf Paws

6 Years Ago

You should see the new The Journey of Stormfast chapters!
Star Wolf

6 Years Ago

Yes, I'll be getting back into your story.
What a beautiful poem. The moon in all its forms can be quite inspiring. I like the fact that you wished upon it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wolf Paws

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
did you find love?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wolf Paws

7 Years Ago

I found you
Megara

7 Years Ago

i was hoping you'd say that:)
Amazing how you can give so much emotion in few words. Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wolf Paws

7 Years Ago

You know this is true.
This is beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


Its awesome!!! My poems stink, but yours rock!!!! I GIVE THIS 10 out of 10

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Wolf Paws
Wolf Paws

Hutto, TX



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