If I Were A...

If I Were A...

A Poem by Annabelle Lee
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Sometimes I get so angry, when people call me names, or when I hear people call my friends names.

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If I were a hoe
Would I be with him
And him only
If I were so popular
Would I feel
So lonely
If I were stupid
Would I have 
Straight As
If I were ugly
Would he 
like me that way
If I were fat
Would I be 
So fast
If I were a nerd
Would I ever
Run track
A label is stupid
You should rise above it
If you do not agree
I'll tell you
Just where you can
Shove it

© 2012 Annabelle Lee


Author's Note

Annabelle Lee
please, if you took the time to read my poem, take a fraction more to review it. Constructive criticism is fully welcomed and appreciated. Thank you!

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this was sick! that ending could not of been put any better. no one was born out of a box. so why label them?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

7 Years Ago

exactly my thoughts as I was writing this, thank you!
Oh yeah! Well said!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How thoughtful and honest... Great poem, and you're definitely right about the labeling in society. Kudos to you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

7 Years Ago

thank you! it mean a lot to me just that you reviewed, I am glad you like it.
The Watcher

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome Anna.
Good job for standing up for yourself. I liked the poem a lot, it had a great message but sometimes I got lost wondering where a certain stanza started and ended but either way it was FAN-TAS-TIC

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

7 Years Ago

better?
Brittany

7 Years Ago

Much
Annabelle Lee

7 Years Ago

k good

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Tags: Labels, names, bullying

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Hello everyone I am Annabelle Lee. I am FINALLY, after June 12, the ripe old age of fifteen. I'm a poet. I want to write novels, as well, but those do not belong on this site in hopes that someday .. more..

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