Just One

One guy

Just one

This can't be

It's just not me

But I keep thinking

About me being

A one guy girl

Just one

How crazy is this

I don't know what it is

I've played around

Settle down?

That's not me

It never will be

Until this one guy

Just one

Day and night, rain and snow 

He's on my mind, I'm sure he knows

He walks past and my heart thump thumps

He says something and it jumps

Just one

But then, 

It only takes one

It only ever will

But is it one for now

Or one for real?

I'll go with for now

I have so much planned

He's just one boy

Who could turn into one man...

Don't think like that, though

You'll get off track

Because one's all it takes

To hold an Annie back

Just one

Just one 

The one?

That one

He's...

No one

Reviews

[Jamie Cook]

I like the ending with the Just one: I was like:
Uh! :o
Uh! :)
Uh! :D
Uh! XD
Uh..! :0
Nope :l
:3

Oh yeah the crazy shtuff when we like someone, oh the thoughts and possibilities and suddenly I'm looking at a women's magazine for dresses O_O haha XD Just kidding but in all seriousness yup! That search for the one, shouldn't even be thought of until our biggest argument stops being:
"He stole my cookie"
"He won't sit with me during nap time"
"I wanted ice cream, but he just wanted to keep playing leggos"
Great poem! :D I enjoyed it so woot woot! :3

[Annabelle Lee]

LOL thanks muchly

[Jamie Cook]

Welcome! :D

[Nia Hope]

Amazing poem keep up the good work, don't doubt it if you like them and they are on the same track as you or at least support what you do :)

[Annabelle Lee]

aw thanks.

[Nia Hope]

Anytime :)

[ANTO]

"He's... no one"
- but not a no-one maybe The one - very clever word play Annabelle Lee. Your analytical style here of the situation hopefully will keep Annie right.

I love this style of writing. This inner speak...

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Simon Welsh]

Sod it, people suck anyway. Just learn to be happy without a crutch. I like this.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[icelandicblue]

It's like pulling the petals off a daisy, he loves me he loves me not. Give it time the one will be revealed.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Baby Ricochet]

It happens to us all annabelle. Good poem

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

Love the stream of consciousness going on here. It framed your indecision over whether to settle on just one guy very well.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Frieda P]

Like your musings here Annabelle, all the thoughts and possibilities that go through your mind in the beginning of an attraction, you're so young dear Annabelle Lee, you'll have plenty of time to think about who the real 'one' is!

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you, frieda

[Frieda P]

So is it on or off? ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

off, i think. haha no time!!!!