Party

this is fictional... my sister did not really die in a drunken accident... she is very much alive i just needed to get the point along

Music blaring

People swearing

Smells like beer

Get me out of here

Go outside and the first thing I see

Is a drunken car crash in front of me

One driver made out unscathed,

My sister, however, could not be saved

Author's Note

don't go easy on me

Reviews

[Brittany]

I could understand what you were trying to say. Even though it was fiction, it flowed well.

[Whiskurz]

A powerfully sad write even if fiction.....Your point was made.....Well penned my friend......Whisk