Want to love

Want to love

A Poem by Ben
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who can give me one

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i think we live each day of our lives waiting patiently for that missing star,each full moon we sit 2 count how many star left,each val we abuse love,but we do know things are not complete with us.
light i desire each night,comfort i demand each cold weather,moon,i stare at wondering why stars shine like love,why darkness hate light,why heaven is d good place $ hell is d bad one,wondering why i can't find my true love.
i wan 2 love, beauty i 've,pretty do i demand,lust i found,but love i want,queen do i ve but angel do i demand,still i wanna love,i would go 2 d moon 2 find whom i want,if i would get her in hell i would break her out,if shes in a castle with dragons,i would become a dragon slayer.
i make no mouth d sun of d night d moon of d day d lighten of d dry weather d stars of hell d beast of d heavens $ d triangle of d earth knows my heart,my heart desire love,i care less about heaven or hell,earth or d underworld,whoever thinks i won't love d lighten will strike with no pity,$ d stars of d hell await them,my heart is open.

© 2012 Ben


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Hello Ben,this is a nice poem but i guess you didnt consider grammatical errors when writin this. you wrote 2 instead of to.d instead of the. but its a cool poem.

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Ben

lagos, christian, Nigeria



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