Riddle L

Riddle L

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I'm heavier than an elephant,
longer than a little palm tree,
yet i fly away free,
open wide skies i face
and my enemy Gravity i always amaze.
I mark the beginning of my passengers' vacation
taking me to escape is such a temptation,
magnificently, among clouds, i dance,
but of turning my annoying noise off there's not a chance. 
if i don't do my job well, people die,
sadly, it's a truth i can't deny,
yesterday i was in Rome, now i'm in Paris, tomorrow who knows?
a man, with his assistant, my future holds,
who am i?
Say my name or say goodbye.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Finally i've written half book =D !
Used Chaucer rhyme scheme (ABBCCDD etc ...),
so what do you think about this one?
The correct answer is ... Airplane.

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Airplane?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Plane

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, it's an airplane! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Airplane?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Awesome:)) and I think it is an aeroplane.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

all your riddles are so cute! This is me FINALLY getting around to doing the read requests :P An airplane? Yup, I'm shmart

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think too it is an aeroplane perhaps ???

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Is it a aeroplane?:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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nice work done here ...i enjoyed reading it

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 19, 2012
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外人 (Gaijin)

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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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