Taylor Swift

Taylor Swift

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Guys, have you ever fell in love for a VIP? Well, I'm having such a HUGE crash for Taylor Swift i wrote her a poem, tell me what you think about it ;)

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Your voice is softer than an angel's,
your beauty is envied by mermaids,
no muse can write better songs than yours,
they teach my heart to love.

When I hear your voice, I fall in love.
Your blond hair fills my dreams, 
no wonder why I smile at night.

I need you,
more than the ocean needs its waves
or the night sky, its lovely moon and
I just feel fainting knowing you'll never know me.

Even if you knew me, what would it change?
I don't deserve you 
and you can look for better than me.

If perfection should be called by another name,
I'd bet the ears that introduced you to me
and these few silly verses that come from my soul,
this name would be Taylor Swift.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
No rhymes, for that poem i decided simply to follow my heart :)

The thing that really hurts me is that, to quote Taylor, "she don't even know me, she's never gonna love me like i want to", well ... guess that's the sad point about falling in love with VIPs xD

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I remember being in love with a singer when I was very young. He was my first "teen crush" and actually my only teen crush. While I thought he was "cute" it was deeper than that. There was something about his music that inspired me and put me on the path to writing. Over 30 years later - I am still on that path.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Don't worry, I have multiple celebrity crushes. I can go all day talking about celebs like Cody Simpson and Louis Tomlinson how they're so dreamy:) This is a great poem, it's cute! Taylor Swift is actually one of my favorite country singers. She's pretty and talented.
Great!


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very sweet. I bet she'd be giddy with excitement if she ever read it. :)

And yes, I know what you mean. I love many celebrities that I'll never even have a chance with. It's very saddening. :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha, i loved this. She is a beautiful person, as well as talented. Nicely done, I many crushes that are celebrities. Girl crushes too....lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Indeed, it follows a train of thought more than logic, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, this is so sweet. Well written! Taylor is an awesome person, and this is a fitting tribute to her!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww. How cute(: I love this

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with the reviews and also, Taylor Swift probably has to contend with crushes that she has on others.

I know you just wrote this down to capture the thoughts, but I think it could benefit from some structure, pacing, and flow. It reads very choppy...and yet your feelings are not. I would work on those things and keep going at it!

Sweet emotions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, Taylor Swift is very pretty, many guys are into her. This is emotional, truthful, positive and i like it alot! You expressed your feeling to her very well! Nothing else to say, amazing! Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem for a amazing young singer. I like her positive energy and beautiful voice. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your truly in love with her. Great poem :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 21, 2012
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