Taylor Swift

Taylor Swift

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Guys, have you ever fell in love for a VIP? Well, I'm having such a HUGE crash for Taylor Swift i wrote her a poem, tell me what you think about it ;)

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Your voice is softer than an angel's,
your beauty is envied by mermaids,
no muse can write better songs than yours,
they teach my heart to love.

When I hear your voice, I fall in love.
Your blond hair fills my dreams, 
no wonder why I smile at night.

I need you,
more than the ocean needs its waves
or the night sky, its lovely moon and
I just feel fainting knowing you'll never know me.

Even if you knew me, what would it change?
I don't deserve you 
and you can look for better than me.

If perfection should be called by another name,
I'd bet the ears that introduced you to me
and these few silly verses that come from my soul,
this name would be Taylor Swift.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
No rhymes, for that poem i decided simply to follow my heart :)

The thing that really hurts me is that, to quote Taylor, "she don't even know me, she's never gonna love me like i want to", well ... guess that's the sad point about falling in love with VIPs xD

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I remember being in love with a singer when I was very young. He was my first "teen crush" and actually my only teen crush. While I thought he was "cute" it was deeper than that. There was something about his music that inspired me and put me on the path to writing. Over 30 years later - I am still on that path.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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lovely poem. i dont really like her but really nice poem:) if she could read this she would love it. :) great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greatly done!keep writing more!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww puppy love

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh! I love it! Like legit haha :) I love Taylor Swift and I love this poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

she is cute though :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Capitalization errors, but i am sure Taylor would be flattered. Nice job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

screw that type of thinking! Go get her!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OOOOMMMGGGG i like her 2 ...(but i never wrote a poem for her )..well nice poem ...i wrote a poem for justin bieber once

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on June 21, 2012
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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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