A Poem by Donicca Dona L


It was only once 
when you grabbed the bottle
and you lost yourself.
Searching one reason
for all those lost abused years.

Trying to understand how he felt
on a state of mind like that for 30years. 
you been my abuser
but alcohol abused you too,


© 2018 Donicca Dona L

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Strong words mentioned it there..
Thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago

This hits hard and delivers like a shard piercing my heart. I recently lost my father to liver failure and Alcohol has been the wedge that drew him and me apart for almost all my life. It is the truth, the sad truth in most cases that not only do you see the monster in the bottle but you also see it's reflection. Very well written, I am shaking after reading this.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Donicca Dona L

2 Years Ago

I am sorry you lost your dad because of alcohol, this one is a personal poem to me my dad didn't die.. read more
Alcohol, a cold hearted abuser. Make you want the wrong things and do the wrong things. Your words. Honest, true and direct. I like them. Thank you Donicca for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on May 15, 2018
Last Updated on May 15, 2018


Donicca Dona L
Donicca Dona L

Podgorica, Tuzi, Montenegro

Hello my name is Donika Lulgjuraj. I am from Montengro, Podgorica. I am an albanian writer. I published my first poem book in 2008 in albanian called ''Rruga e jetes'' translated '' the way of life'' .. more..

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