.....

Who am I kidding?!!!

In a room full of people!

My eyes still look for yours!

Donicca L

d.lpoetry

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Donika,

It's simply Richard, coming to sample your writes.
This one, for example, is far more vast than its three simple lines … it touches so many memories, emotions, and moments of sadness, loneliness, and deep yearning for that special someone I know in my heart I'll never forget.

That, M'Lady, is poetry, indeed!
Thank you warmly, Donika, for sharing your excellent pen. ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Donicca Dona L]

thank you so much for your time and love !! You made my day!

[Richard🖌]

Time is worth naught but the value of the one with whom it is shared.
Love flows freely from one caring heart into another's who accepts it.

You are most warmly welcome, Donika, to my humble time and love. 🍃

[Relic]

Great sentiment and nice rhythm in this. A perfect combination.

[Donicca Dona L]

thank you so much !

[Danny Metcalfe]

I understand the sentiment of the piece. The eyes are the windows to the soul. A nice 3 line poem.

[Donicca Dona L]

thank you so much for your time and review :)