Take Another Breath

Take Another Breath

A Poem by Donna Lorenz
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Anyone who cares for a poet will understand this one.

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Take Another Breath!

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I am living an adventure

It has lasted for some time.

Although it is exciting

This is your dream, never mine.

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And so my love, as you do know

I patiently must wait.

Come down for your next breath.

For me, is it too late?!

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Your stories are so varied

Of the life you have lead.

Just rest here beside me

On our very lovely bed.

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My hands caress your muscled back

Feel that vulnerable child within.

Wish I had an eraser

Take away some things, have been.

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Your poetry is beautiful

In wee dark hours you wake and yawn.

It comes upon you quickly as

Thoughts form to Prose by dawn.

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Your mind is the adventure

It never seems to rest.

Every time you turn around

One more challenge you must test.

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I want your love my darling

And you certainly need mine.

You are the most exciting thing

To happen in some time!

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So stay with me my dearest

Regenerate those empty cells,

And lose yourself in loving me

So we can renew ourselves.

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Tomorrow is a new day

With great new things to do,

You loving me tonight

Will bless me as well as you.

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When he comes I wait for him,

The whole world is why he goes,

Why else would he leave me?

Only Heaven really knows!

 

DL

© 2011 Donna Lorenz


Author's Note

Donna Lorenz
From the heart!

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I felt the emotion in this peice. Love the flow, this poem is beautiful and heartfelt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved the rhyming along with the touching
story behind it. I can Identify with each and
every stanza, well written...


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Donna Lorenz
Donna Lorenz

Pumpkin Center, CA



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I have been in CA here for years and do love it. I also have been in much of the United States and surrounding countries and to Europe twice. I Enjoy learning about people and love to travel. Poetr.. more..

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